Wednesday 24 September 2014
100 Word Challenge - Week 4 by Caleb
I was just about to eat a soft, orange pepper. It looked delicious when two short, stubby legs shot out of it and kicked me in the face and ran out the door calling me a big fat crocodile! I chased it out of Canada and into South America. It ran into a swamp and ate its way out. I nearly forgot why I was chasing this orange pepper I was so focused on the pepper I didn't notice big fat crocodiles jumping over me. I looked down at a big crocodile beside me. It bit off my leg.
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Wow, I really loved this imaginative story! I liked how something surprising happened in each sentence. What a shame the character lost his leg!
ReplyDeleteI think you mis-typed the word "it" in the 5th sentence: I think it was meant to say "I".
Well done!
So sorry to hear about your leg. This fun, fantastic creative writing. Way to go!
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