Once there was a little boy named Drake. Drake was playing a video game it's called "Pepper the Orange Crocodile". So Drake was minding his own business but Drake forgot to take his AWESOME PILLS. An AWESOME PILL is a pill that you put in your favourite soda then you shake it, then you open it, then BOOM! POW! SLICE! It EXPLODES! If it touches you you're officially Awesome. Make the least AWESOME person in your house clean the mess or blame it on your sister. If you don't have a sister, Good luck! P.S. the soda is soft.
Hi Adam! Thank you for entering this week's 100 WC. I enjoyed your piece of writing. You managed to get all five words into your work as well! I like the way you used capital letters to add interest and emphasis. Remember that if you are using the word that is short for 'you are' then it's spelt 'you're' Well done and I look forward to reading your next piece!
ReplyDeleteMrs Davis (Team 100WC) Cambridge, England